\o/ I don't know what to exclaim about first! I am so happy to see this update...
Eridan and Dualscar being adorable together before Karkat walked in is, like, the cutest thing ever and the closest I'm going to come to liking kid!fic. :D
"Your Devastation" makes me grin: such a very troll sort of title! (Alas for the seadwellers who have to pronounce its V, though.)
Sollux! I love snarky!moirail!Sollux. Unironically telling Karkat to eat! And Karkat's earlier "Imperial order" against making a duality thing out of the breeders' relationship. Be still, my heart; snarky adorableness is even better than the standard sort!
Karkat being inwardly intimidated by Dualscar -- amazing and awesome, because of how completely he covers it; never would have guessed, from the sections in Eridan's viewpoint! <3 Karkat, you're adorabloodthirsty by my standards; I believed you completely. :D
Love the differences in what each one notices, too -- Eridan notices wording, and matches things against his training, while Karkat notices the differences between projection and emotion, both the genuine (Eridan's so happy to see him, despite having no 'reason') and the feigned (seductive confidence covering battle-nerves).
Re: "a jewel in the scarlet crown," Karkat/Eridan, Karkat/Dualscar, slavery, forced breeding, 5/?
Eridan and Dualscar being adorable together before Karkat walked in is, like, the cutest thing ever and the closest I'm going to come to liking kid!fic. :D
"Your Devastation" makes me grin: such a very troll sort of title! (Alas for the seadwellers who have to pronounce its V, though.)
Sollux! I love snarky!moirail!Sollux. Unironically telling Karkat to eat! And Karkat's earlier "Imperial order" against making a duality thing out of the breeders' relationship. Be still, my heart; snarky adorableness is even better than the standard sort!
Karkat being inwardly intimidated by Dualscar -- amazing and awesome, because of how completely he covers it; never would have guessed, from the sections in Eridan's viewpoint! <3 Karkat, you're adorabloodthirsty by my standards; I believed you completely. :D
Love the differences in what each one notices, too -- Eridan notices wording, and matches things against his training, while Karkat notices the differences between projection and emotion, both the genuine (Eridan's so happy to see him, despite having no 'reason') and the feigned (seductive confidence covering battle-nerves).